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Re: I'm Nine
I think the main reason people tell you that you're too young is because they dont want you to worry about anything. Take the time to grow up. It's not ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: The Gift
The parents had no choice but to send Arianna on her own. They didnt want to but because they felt that they were in fact protecting her. When she left ...
May 16, 2015 -
Re: Little girl
*sighs* it isnt very nice to say the f word on here >.>
May 6, 2015 -
Re: Little girl
Im just going to point out that this "story" here doesnt match the description at all. This should be rated high that what it's rated as.
May 5, 2015 -
Re: Pulled Apart
Im not here to review (much) But im more here to say that this is really relateable. my last relationship my boyfriend kissed his best friend. Haven't talked to either ...
Apr 27, 2015 -
Re: All Secrets Untold - Chapter Two
Ohhh there's the part i been waiting for. Scar I love this book to death but of course you knew this. xD
Apr 19, 2015 -
Re: Family
It's good nonetheless
Apr 7, 2015 -
Re: Family
Ah ok, that explains it.
Apr 7, 2015 -
Re: What We Want
I wrote this on WFP and did not notice the extra spaces. I did proofread this and must have missed this as it was late when i actually wrote it ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Escaping F.A.T.E.
Have you been near a tv lately??? Also you shouldnt really use words or acronyms like "wtf" i dont mean to be rude or anything but you shouldnt write reviews ...
Mar 16, 2015 -
Re: Escaping F.A.T.E.
Chrissy im not counting this as a review because right now im on mobile but i just wanted to tell you that this is a great start there are some ...
Mar 16, 2015 -
Re: Escaping F.A.T.E.
you misspelled Liam Neeson kevin
Mar 16, 2015 -
Re: Little Sister Chapter 8 (unedited)
I switched the writing style here in this chapter because I didnt feel like I was giving out enough descriptions and characterization when I was writing in third person. James, ...
Feb 26, 2015 -
Re: Little Sister Chapter 8 (unedited)
Raye went missing 11 years previously so the death of Katrina was really shocking hence the hour long report. The reporters wanted everyone to know the facts.
Feb 26, 2015 -
Re: Dual Identity - Prologue
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Jan 25, 2015
Hey hon, Mem here to review
