Amnesia

Maybe Reason five needs to be rewritten? I dont know it just seemed a tad bit insulting. Other than that I laughed too hard at this one xD.

Glad I could Help

Actually i wrote this on gdocs so I didnt really have my resources to read back but yes I'll totally fix that little inconsistency soon

No the poem came from a moment of anger

Im not mad either i just thought id explain why it sounds rude

Drop, this was written in a moment of anger after a girl i considered a close friend went behind my back calling me various names, im sorry if it came ...

Ah, That makes sense, I know that the poem Was about how it makes you feel, I just thought..yeah i dont know why I added the thing about sarotonin

You can use the Idea for the collection of letters, I use letters like this to release somethings I cant say physically because I freak out that someone might take ...

Nessa you basically just insulted most of my friends

It's ok I kinda figured that it would trip up new readers

It was night in the beginning of the chapter, You have to read the chapter before this one in order to understand exactly what's happening in this one.

WHAT. damn it Hatt!............That's disowning you.

Makes sense to me. and for the record I laughed till my lungs decided I wasnt allowed to laugh

Hello there Meredeth. Tis I the frenchiest fry xD. Im here to review your beautiful poem here. I can honestly say that I love this poem because of the use ...

Satira, Arkhaion writes credible reviews that you know actually help the writer progress. Its not thier fault if someone (you) dont take creative critisim very well.