Amice

Fantastical I'm impressed Run with me as we fly completely free Where there's many places to go and see, Laugh with me as your heart glows Where the cool waters ...

Very good! I like it lots! Except... :) But she'll never cry when she falls down A child? Never cry when she falls down? I just don't think that to ...

In my own humble personal little opinion... :P I didn't care for the adjective exploding because it brings to mind things like dynamite and fireworks. Not something like snowclouds. But ...

Stars in the sky *no comma necessary* Reflect in your eyes *period maybe?* Your eyes light up so bright *somewhat awkward* As you hold me so tight *don't overuse the ...

I like this poem too! I cannot seem to find, I cannot speak to you. Umm. ...cannot seem to find what ? Probably dumb question, but I'd rather just say ...

Very good poem! Umm The central idea I was getting was the contrast of color/beauty and achromatism/nothingness. The last two lines then hit on light/darkness...? Mkay, and I would take ...

Thumbs up from me! I have a bad habit of daydreaming... I totally relate to this theme. I think it could have been longer!! Good progression through the points (danger, ...

It was cool for what it was... One comment though. "It was but a day ago Since he was playing In the shallows of Childhood water And now he has ...

I also thought the rhyming was a little forced... nothing that can't be overcome with practice and expanding your vocabulary. I did think the idea was clever And I like ...

My first thought wasn't "emotional" but I suppose it does cover a variety of emotions... anger, hate, crying, anticipation... all found their way into your poem without making it overly ...

Pretty interesting ... I was a little disappointed to see a few spelling errors But other than that... I'd never looked into lucid dreaming before I love to sleep! It's ...