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Hi! I really liked this. It was so simple, and I loved how you based it off of a song! I don't know why, but just the simplicity of this ...

Hola! Okay, personally, I felt like I was watching a movie in fast forward. I think you should slow it down and write with more detail. Also, I think you ...

This was really sad, and I'm on the verge of tears right now! This was so beautifully written, and I love the repetitiveness of the "buts". The description and emotion ...

Hi! I really liked this, and I want to know what happens next! :) Although I found one grammatical error in the second paragraph: You were talking in 1st person, ...

Hi! This was a little confusing, but I actually really liked it! I liked how it had a lot of mystery in it, and the description at the beginning was ...

Okay, I'm very confused right now. I think you're going to want to elaborate on this a bit more. Although the description in the fight scene was fantastic, I was ...

Hi! I really liked this. Although, I was confused with the prologue: Why wouldn't they tell her she had a twin brother? I realize it will help later in the ...

Hi! I liked the mystery in this piece. It really made me want to keep reading. Seriously though, tell me when the next part of this is coming out please! ...

Wow. This was really good and mysterious. What happens next? :) I liked the mystery of this piece, and the description in the beginning. Although, one thing that I found ...

I liked this. I liked how it had conflict, which I notice some stories are lacking. I liked the the picture too, it kind of helped get show the story ...

Hi! This was actually really good! I wasn't sure how it would be, honestly, when I saw the description. But it seemed like a very new idea, and I really ...

Hi! Okay honestly, I found this a little confusing. You said it was post-modern, but it sounds kind of old-timey to me. Also, I was confused about who Dead was. ...

Hi! Okay. You said there were going to be more parts to this, and I'm glad because I have absolutely no idea what could happen next. This was a nice ...

Hi! Okay, just to get this out of the way, I think you should keep this going. The ending doesn't really symbolize an end, exactly. Also, so far, the title ...

Hi! This was pretty good! I feel the need to say this in every review, just to make sure: So this was a story about an abusive boyfriend and his ...