Amfliflier

To me it sounds like an abusive relationship problem. Which I don't think gets enough attention. Kudos to you for that. The description was great, and I liked the emotion. ...

I like the story, but no offense, but it sounds like every other break-up story. The girl follows the guy into a room, finds out he's cheating, and runs out ...

That was really good. I loved the description in it, but I just need a little clarification. So, was he dead, or did he just, you know, move on? Just ...

That was really cool! I liked the description in your story. I've read some of your previous stories, and I know how much talent and potential you have. I could ...

Wow. I don't really know what to say about that, except wow. But I was also a little confused. So, I guess she killed him, if it wasn't just a ...

I'm sorry, but I was really confused. Was the main character a guy, or a girl? I'm guessing a guy, but I'm not really sure. But the description in this ...

That was really good. I didn't really understand what the music thing was, or what it had to do with the story, but it was really cool nonetheless. Your description ...

I was kind of confused. So, is she real or fake? The description is really amazing though! Also, not that it matters, but I didn't really understand the title. Tango? ...

That was really cute! I don't know if cute is what you were really going for, but it was! It was a little predictable though. And you made it seem ...

That was really good, but I was a little confused. If they were best friends, wouldn't she know it was him? Or wouldn't she see him around school with her ...

That was like a more sincere version of Your Love is my Drug by Ke$ha! It was amazing! I know you feel sad when writing it, but that was great! ...

Okay. I didn't really like this because this is like every other romance story I've seen. They break up, flirt a little more, and suddenly they are both deeply in ...

That was really cool. I felt sad while reading that! I guess that's a good thing when you're writing! But I was a little confused about the letter. If this ...

Wow! That was really cool! I liked the rhyming, because I know they're not all supposed to rhyme, but to me it sounds like real poetry when it does! I ...

Wow. That was amazing. You said that was based on real events? I could picture everything! I think the personal connection helped make it seem that much more real. I ...