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That was a really sweet story. I like how the dog didn't know everything that we knew, like how she didn't know what a baby was called. Pardon my language, ...

That was really cool! Again, as it was mentioned before, there are some grammar and spelling errors, but I'm not going to get into the gory details. ;) I liked ...

That was really cool! I'm glad it wasn't like everyone else's, how everything was perfect and there were no problems with her life. Although I'm sure it was mentioned before, ...

Haha this was great! I didn't know what a Gary-Stu was, but I knew what Mary Sue was! That was so true though, which was the bad part, but the ...

Haha, that was actually kind of disturbing. I don't know if that's what you were going for, but it worked! xD Anyway, I wish I could write something as creative ...

That was really cute! I like how you based it off of something totally random, and it still turned out good! I liked the funny presents though! I can just ...

That was a really cool story! Although, I think you meant to post that in Romantic Short Stories? I don't know, it still seemed pretty fantasy to me. Anyway, the ...

That was a really cool story. I never would've thought of the concept of a happy couple breaking up for no reason. And the statement at the beginning was so ...

Haha! That was really cute! I remember when you told me the idea, and I thought it was going to crash and burn! xD It turned out really good! I ...

That was pretty cool. I don't think very many people write about teenage pregnancy, so, props. I really like the emotion in the story. I really think you should keep ...

That was really cool! I liked the followup to Mockingjay. I was in suspense until about ten seconds ago! You described everything so well, and the emotion was so true! ...

That was a really cool piece. I liked the mysterious part of the song. But I was kind of sad at the end, but I realized I was just confused. ...

That piece made me sad, which I assume was the goal, so good job! I liked the description in this piece. The scary part is, the description made it seem, ...

That was a really cool piece! It reminds me of a piece I just read, and they are both amazing! The description was perfect, and the part where he was ...

That was a really beautiful piece! I liked how the moth and the flame can be compared to people, which is actually kind of sad. The description and the emotion ...