Amfliflier

Hey there! :) Wow, this was a really powerful piece. The emotion was so real, and I liked how you made it raw, by keeping some of the language in ...

Hey there! :) That was really cool. I have to say, it was the title that drew me in, so good job with that. I liked how it told the ...

Hey there! :) Okay, I was a little confused, but only because I haven't read or studied their story yet. But I just had to chck this out because of ...

Hey there! :) I liked this, although it seemed a bit odd to me. I don't understand what the phone conversation has to do with the story, other than the ...

Hey there! Ummmmmm... Maybe there was some deep meaning to this I just haven't seen yet, but this was a little weird. ;) I liked it though. It seemed not ...

Oh. My. Gosh. This was amazing! And awful! But by awful, I mean it's awful what happened to Johara, but the storyline was great! I'm really glad we now know ...

Hi there! :) Okay, a few things: 1. This sounded very much like the Boogeyman. Not that I'm accusing you of copying anyone, but this is kind of what it ...

'Ello mate! ;) Haha yes! I so called it! I totally knew they were going to kiss at some point! xD Anyway... I liked a break from the action, since ...

Hey there! I laughed at the end of this. It was funny how he said, "It would make the forest sound like a cake walk." I remembered that before they ...

Hello again! :) Ooooh, what's gonna be inside that door? ;) I found a little of this to be unrealistic though. When Duncan first got stabbed, Sarah said he only ...

Hello there! :) I smiled at the last sentence, because it reminded me of myself sometimes. I had never been happier to be wrong. I just loved that. :) And ...

Hello again! :) From the sounds of how the story is going, they're going to have enough people joining them to kill Kane and all of his men! By this, ...

Hey there! Again, you nailed it. Although I was a teensy-weensy confused as to why Sarah went with him. If she's a "medicine woman" (and most certainly not a witch ...

Hey there! :) I'm starting to like this novel more and more as it progresses. I think I finally got it down. Dean is the Chi, and Duncan is the ...

Hey there! Again! I was a little confused about who Duncan was at first. I assumed the main character was a girl, (big mistake) and I thought Duncan was an ...