AmeliaCogin

HI, well, I wasn't sure whether to write more - do you think I need to? I kind of liked it short and sweet. Please let me know what you ...

Hi icyflame you are totally right!

Hi! I really loved this poem! Very simple yet stunning. I think perhaps you could've used more punctuation: commas and colons, namely. I really liked the whole theme of the ...

Hi! thanks so much for your comments! This is quite a difficult subject for me and to have such good reviews for a poem expressing my emotions was so great!Thanks ...

Thank-you for your opinions, everyone. I'm quite proud of this piece, and I'm sorry Aziraphale if that's the way you felt. I agree with the others that it needs rounding ...

Hi, this was short and sweet, quite charming too. A few of the sentences need to be rewritten just to make the piece flow a little bit more smoothly. Thanks! ...

Hi, this was short and sweet, quite charming too. A few of the sentences need to be rewritten just to make the piece flow a little bit more smoothly. Thanks! ...

Hi, this was short and sweet, quite charming too. A few of the sentences need to be rewritten just to make the piece flow a little bit more smoothly. Thanks! ...

Hi! I loved this story. Very emotive. No obvious mistakes, but in parts I felt that the sentences could have been constructed a little better. Other than that this was ...

Hi, I haven't got much else to say other than I really liked this and I thought it was great. A job well done. Thanks, keep up the good work! ...

Hi, thanks for your thoughts. I think being descriptive is one of my strongpoints but I agree I did overdo it a little in this piece. As I said, It ...

I loved this. So brilliant. I just wanted to keep reading and reading. You're a very talented writer - I really enjoyed this piece. Thanks! Fab read! :)

Thanks for your comments. It's the first story I've ever posted and I wasn't too sure of the reaction I was going to get. It was inspired by a news ...

Really enjoyed this story. The quality of your writing is excellent :)