AlyssaKyle

Hello! Alright, let's get to it, shall we? I was glad that you had a structure to your song. You wouldn't believe how many songs are posted without a chorus. ...

Hello there! Typically, I don't care for poems with a scattererd structure or none at all, but I think it works for this. Although I must say, I did feel ...

This poem was beautiful. You did an excellent job of capturing the emotion. I felt sad just reading it. I like how you talk about memories from the past as ...

Hello there! Alright, let's get to it! I'll start off with my nit picks. If I am correct, you have the second and fourth lines of each stanza rhyming. If ...

Hello there! And welcome to YWS! Okay, to my review. I'm typically not a fan of stanzas built of different lengths, but I think it works for this poem. I ...

Hey there! You did a good job on this poem, no signs of rust that I could spot. There was a natural flow and meter when I read, which is ...

Okay, I'm a little frustrated because I just wrote you a fantastic review and it didn't take. So I will try to do it again. Wow, a lot of people ...

Hey Justin. This just popped up in my newsfeed, so I figured I might as well check it out. This was very interesting, as always. It feels like a grouping ...

I actually think the ending of your poem does give the reader something to think about. It challenges them to evaluate their life to check if they are being true ...

Kaila, this was amazing. I absolutely love it. The imagery you used was perfect for what you were saying, and the story is beautiful. Is this really a memory form ...

Hello there! You did a nice job with this. I think the bold and italics really add to what you are trying to convey. I like how the beginning and ...

I really love this poem! It reminds me of how I felt when I passed my boyfriend in the hallway when we first started talking. I pretty much agree with ...

Hey there, God! I truly enjoyed reading your poem. I like how you took the cliche of dust in the wind and twisted it into something different and new. One ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! This was jam packed with strong imagery for such a short poem. I especially like these lines: "Bold and lustrous orange above Lisping, aging, mourning ...

Hey there Welcome to YWS. The review above covered all the grammatical things I noticed, so I won't bother repeating them. I think this poem worked without being broken up ...