AlyTheBookworm

Thanks for the review Snowmonkey! When I wrote the line where they say they are a ghost, I was thinking of how ghosts are just shadows of the people they ...

Thanks for the review Radrook, I agree that the last stanza needs revision. The rhythm is off and it doesn't have the same rhyme scheme as the rest of the ...

Glad it was helpful :)

Thanks for the review! :)

Thanks for the review! I'll keep this in mind. I'm glad you liked Idenrae though. :)

Thanks! :D

Gotta go to bed, so I can't write a full review atm, but I love this. It was a nice surprise- I wasn't expecting to find any works that I'd ...

Just realized that the song you're probably thinking of is one from the movie version of Holes

If you search it up you can see it's from the book, but it is a song that Madame Zeroni, one of the characters, sings. Out of curiosity, where'd you ...

Just a quick comment- you should probably say somewhere that the italicized lines are from the book Holes. I'd write a review for this except that I'm both bad at ...

No problem, so glad it helped. Good luck writing! :)

Thanks so much! :D

Thanks for the feedback! :)

Haha, at least it's memorable. :) By the way, I edited it a bit. I haven't dealt with all of the problems you pointed out, but I tried to clear ...

Thanks for the review! If I post the next chapter, I'll tag you. This was a lot of help and really eye-opening.. I'm glad I posted my story, because I ...