Alteran

Thanks for the comments. Im trying to take the view point of no one read the first book so i'm working on introducing the characters all over again. I'm not ...

Thakns guys. Sam He was having fun because he didn't know until he saw them. I think. It's my story and i'm not totally sure but i'm prtetty sure that ...

I don't know if that's any better but it just kinda hit me all of a sudden.

Thanks peoples. I wrote this for my Creative writing class and it had to be 4 lines or less. But i agree with the confusion. I lost it's meaning a ...

Well. This is the last chapter i'll be posting on YWS. The novel is finished but i should stop now and work on agents and such...ugh... But if anyone really ...

COOKIEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *munch munch* Sorry. coudn't help myself.

Yepiee! KH. As i said before very nice. I wasn't paying attention to spelling or typos but i might go back later. I just wanted to say you did a ...

KH is so cool. You do a good job of displaying the characters. I feel like i'm playing the game or something. I'm interested to see how this plays out. ...

Let's see what we have here. :) Ethers “Fuck.” He was under his desk. The room vibrated again, dust shaking all around him landing in his mane of black hair. ...

I might completely delete this. We'll see. Margaritaville The room was dense, heavy with the smoke of lust and heated, like a sinful calm. Two crimson high-heels were crossed one ...

A good horror story needs to build up. Don't rush me MH. I wanted it to have a funny side too. That's why i'm picking on barbie.

OMG. I just read the second part and i am like in love with it. I don't have time to do a good crit but i will tomorrow hopefully. It ...

I thought the dark elite was mre towards fantasy. I mean a true Horror Literary forum. ya know somethig like "For tales that make blood boil, spines shatter, and the ...

A superduper mega update. All three of my lovely chapters in one nifty post. YWS is back. happy. *exhalts* what a sec....can't do that here. ha ha.

Updated with the three prolouge histories i made on TSR. I'll add the next one after a while. I need to get readjusted.