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Today , I just stopped feeling real[s],[/s] stopped feeling present. Like my hands might sink through the desk, no longer solid enough for it to hold them. Like I could ...

Blue Crystal Chapter One: Vastii in Black (part i) The scene was illuminated by Rylan’s glass-and-bronze lamp, which shed a steady orange glow interrupted only by the framing of the ...

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Intro: A World Torn Apart ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ The leaves spiraled down towards the cement in a fiery torrent of color. The breeze tousled my hair and I inhaled the scent ...

“Thanks Bell,” she said quietly, wiping away the chocolate that[s]’s[/s] drool[s]ing[/s] ed down the sides. Suddenly, she felt a slight rush of heat dancing on her back. The grass rekindled ...

As I sit her [s]e[/s] alone my thoughts drift back to you and all the hell you put me through but you didn't mean to drag me half way there ...

Happy Holiday wishes from the CCF and Rickage. Death came swiftly that Midsummer's night; I doubt such a young girl could put up much a fight. Thar red part was ...

Sorry this took so long ****** Chapter 22 A kettle whistled shrilly. Here bony fingers lifted it and poured it into a small gaudy cup and saucer. The herbs at ...

This Critique is brought to you by the CCF, courtesy of Trident. Happy Holidays. ____ [The Beggarboy] It was the Beggarboy who found the body. The Beggarboy had stood on ...

It was a slow day. A small shop in the middle of a small town. I guess nobody was going out , for the rain and fog [s]was[/s] were so ...

" The name’s Tam. " So, imagine that. She’s just lying there crying. So what am I supposed to do? Dunno. She was doing better, at least. Trying to regain ...

I like it, the begginning was confusing because you never really identified who was speaking. 'I'd rather you cut my wires.' That is my favorite line. Other than it being ...

The Dialogue is rather bland. It read unaturally like they weren't real people talking. It seemed forced. Their reactions are a bit off as well, I mean why wouldn't he ...

[pre] Have you heard the phrase, "Walk a mile in each other shoes?" Well , what if you did ? [s]s[/s] S ome how you mysteriously swapped minds with another ...

"Joooooohhhnnn....Joooohhhhnnn.... look at me john..." "what?[s]" "[/s]huh" this voice, it was familiar , [s]....[/s]but who was it[s],[/s] [s]i[/s] I just can't place my finger on it..... " Jooooohhh

That had been nearly ten years ago. Jennifer Sweet had successfully completed her training as a Queller, and was now working as an ambassador, trade negotiator, and mediator between disputes. ...