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Re: Adventures of the SPEW Gryphon
Adam paced around the YWS Beta Station. It was the closest place the Highwind could be repaired. Lucky for them the Spammians were beaten back, for now. "I really wish ...
Aug 19, 2007 -
Re: Loki
How interesting. I enjoyed your portrayal of Loki very much. It suited him well. You info dumped pretty much the whole way through, a bit annoying. You need to drw ...
Aug 19, 2007 -
Re: A Winter Memory
Hello there, Magicman. I will be your CCF Critique this evening. Please place your tray in the upright position and....*attention span depleted* I can't sleep now. Snowflakes drifted down from ...
Aug 18, 2007 -
Re: Esper's Sepulchral I: Chapter 3: The Beach Party
Pikara lay on the bed, her legs dangling off the edge. She [s]sprang[/s] twisted the phone cord around her finger impatiently, waiting for the operator to direct her call to ...
Aug 16, 2007 -
Re: Mein Herz Brennt: A Chair of Darkness EP
Wow, DD has a soundtrack! That'll make the movie production go much faster. *pokes DD to hurry it along*(Like I'm one to talk) *sleeps outside bookstore until book reaches shelves* ...
Aug 16, 2007 -
Re: When A Dreamer Dies
Prologue There is a place not known to man physically, but by man's dream. It is said not to exist, a fool's dream if you will. If so , let ...
Aug 14, 2007 -
Re: Those Nights
There’s always this one song that say’s exactly how you feel, and you listen to it. The magic sets in. You hear the words and your mind wanders to that ...
Aug 9, 2007 -
Re: Clau's Contest: Chinese Fairy Tale [for crits]
The Six Dumbest Brothers Based off the Chinese fairy tale Once upon a time in a far, far, far away land—there lived an emperor with a pearl. The land was ...
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: The Shadows of My Past
File 1, Part 1 "Here," Jack Harlington, the infamous "Black Jack" hunter and my boss, said as he slid a box towards me. It's big, brown, and has the name ...
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: Galactic Ranger GR-8D (FanFic of Ratchet, UYA)
Brought to you on Behalf of the CCF, we apologize for the delay. Note: Not edited whatsoever. A terrible read I know, but I'd like suggestions. Planning on editing soon. ...
Aug 7, 2007 -
Re: Claudestine
All was quiet in the mountainous town; the only sound were from the sky—the chirping of passing hawks, Hawks dont really chirp the rustle of the wind as it brushed ...
Aug 6, 2007 -
Re: The Accused
“There are crowds of people all around, shouting, clamor, ten thousand face s , ten thousand eyes—you have to bear it all, but the main thing is the thought: ‘there’s ...
Aug 5, 2007 -
Re: With Wood and Resin
I enjoyed this. I would have never got it if you hadn't said it was about your violin. It is a very interesting way to describe it. Of course i ...
Aug 4, 2007 -
Re: TKAM essay-- Proofreading please!
To Kill a Mockingbird is a book that takes a revealing look at childhood, integrity, and prejudice. However, the relevance of its title is not immediately obvious. Harper Lee uses ...
Aug 4, 2007 -
Re: Alex DeJule
How...uhh...I'm a little scared to be honest. It has a nice way of it, I think it would b more of a spoken kind of song as some areas dont ...
Aug 3, 2007
