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  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Adventures of the SPEW Gryphon

    Adam paced around the YWS Beta Station. It was the closest place the Highwind could be repaired. Lucky for them the Spammians were beaten back, for now. "I really wish ...

    Aug 19, 2007
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Loki

    How interesting. I enjoyed your portrayal of Loki very much. It suited him well. You info dumped pretty much the whole way through, a bit annoying. You need to drw ...

    Aug 19, 2007
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: A Winter Memory

    Hello there, Magicman. I will be your CCF Critique this evening. Please place your tray in the upright position and....*attention span depleted* I can't sleep now. Snowflakes drifted down from ...

    Aug 18, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Esper's Sepulchral I: Chapter 3: The Beach Party

    Pikara lay on the bed, her legs dangling off the edge. She [s]sprang[/s] twisted the phone cord around her finger impatiently, waiting for the operator to direct her call to ...

    Aug 16, 2007
  • Other » General, General Re: Mein Herz Brennt: A Chair of Darkness EP

    Wow, DD has a soundtrack! That'll make the movie production go much faster. *pokes DD to hurry it along*(Like I'm one to talk) *sleeps outside bookstore until book reaches shelves* ...

    Aug 16, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: When A Dreamer Dies

    Prologue There is a place not known to man physically, but by man's dream. It is said not to exist, a fool's dream if you will. If so , let ...

    Aug 14, 2007
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Those Nights

    There’s always this one song that say’s exactly how you feel, and you listen to it. The magic sets in. You hear the words and your mind wanders to that ...

    Aug 9, 2007
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Clau's Contest: Chinese Fairy Tale [for crits]

    The Six Dumbest Brothers Based off the Chinese fairy tale Once upon a time in a far, far, far away land—there lived an emperor with a pearl. The land was ...

    Aug 8, 2007
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Shadows of My Past

    File 1, Part 1 "Here," Jack Harlington, the infamous "Black Jack" hunter and my boss, said as he slid a box towards me. It's big, brown, and has the name ...

    Aug 8, 2007
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Galactic Ranger GR-8D (FanFic of Ratchet, UYA)

    Brought to you on Behalf of the CCF, we apologize for the delay. Note: Not edited whatsoever. A terrible read I know, but I'd like suggestions. Planning on editing soon. ...

    Aug 7, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Claudestine

    All was quiet in the mountainous town; the only sound were from the sky—the chirping of passing hawks, Hawks dont really chirp the rustle of the wind as it brushed ...

    Aug 6, 2007
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Accused

    “There are crowds of people all around, shouting, clamor, ten thousand face s , ten thousand eyes—you have to bear it all, but the main thing is the thought: ‘there’s ...

    Aug 5, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: With Wood and Resin

    I enjoyed this. I would have never got it if you hadn't said it was about your violin. It is a very interesting way to describe it. Of course i ...

    Aug 4, 2007
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: TKAM essay-- Proofreading please!

    To Kill a Mockingbird is a book that takes a revealing look at childhood, integrity, and prejudice. However, the relevance of its title is not immediately obvious. Harper Lee uses ...

    Aug 4, 2007
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Alex DeJule

    How...uhh...I'm a little scared to be honest. It has a nice way of it, I think it would b more of a spoken kind of song as some areas dont ...

    Aug 3, 2007


That's just what translation is, I think. That's all speaking is. Listening to the other and trying to see past your own biases to glimpse what they're trying to say. Showing yourself to the world, and hoping someone else understands.
— Ramy (Babel by R. F. Kuang)