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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Hare's Tale

    o.o Okay, the comments above all agree with me, this piece is ah-mazing! It certainly deserves to be featured and I think I've already told you that. Nice job! Keep ...

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: My Green Tea Latte - Prologue

    Hi there! I'm here :D I agree with all the comments above. Who said that prologues have to be long? This short one definitely makes me want to read more, ...

    Sep 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Waiting for You

    Hello there, Sweethearts! This is a very lovely poem, and I'm a fan of the format that you've used. Using the seasons to represent the time that has passed is ...

    Sep 22, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: I Wish by Skee-Low parody

    Hi there! Wow, I just listened to the original songs, and your parody fits PERFECTLY! Congrats on doing that! My favorite line in the orig I Wish song was "She ...

    Sep 22, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Romeo and Cinderella

    What a sweet tale! I really really liked this story and I think you've done a great job in it save a few points. Okay, one point: dialogue. It sometimes ...

    Sep 22, 2011
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: What have you done?

    Heyyy sista! I know I acted a bit. skeptical when you said my avvie was ruining you Dramione hopes, so I stalked your profile a bit and I found this ...

    Sep 2, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The stuffed toy applicant

    *wide eyes* Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow, how come there aren't any more likes? I totally loved the originality of your story

    Jun 13, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Kiss me in the rain, baby.

    You. Are. Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. Amazing.Amazing.Amazing.Amazing.Amazing.Amazing.Amazing. Amazing. Omg I absolutley love this story! It is so sweet and touching. I love how you have the guy that i

    Jun 13, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I Can't Believe It

    Hey, Nike! That nit pick I found was already pointed out, so no need to mention it. I liked it, too! Sweet, realistic (in high schools, you don't say "I ...

    Jun 13, 2011
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Twilight *Contains excessive nagging and puke worthyness*

    "I hate Twi. And I love you." This was AWESOME! Great, funny, quirky,super-cool! Keep on writing writing writing writing writing writing writing writing writing writing writing writing writing writing

    Mar 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Haikus of The Periodic Table of Elements

    Oh, my. That. Was. Totally. Absolutely. AWESOME! I totally loved it, and I can see why it received 14 "likes'! My favorite: 84 and 88. Polonium and Radium Atoms discovered ...

    Mar 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: And Then They Live On

    OOO, o,o,o,! Me likey, Kafky! Love it, very simple, yet very... ummm... shucks, I can't find the word to describe it :( Actually that's a good thing.. right? Anyway, thanks ...

    Mar 24, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Thunder Pussy

    Super cool! Hahaha what the hell man. sounds like a few of the kids at my school My exact same thought! I really liked it, and I laughed during some ...

    Feb 18, 2011
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: the incredibal icecube

    The incredible ice cube I remember it was year 88 B.C. and I was running from the other kids in the tribe. I was running and tripped and fell on ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Warmth-Seeker

    Hi! This is amazing. I really loved it, and I almost wept when I read the ending. It's just so sad... Any way, I noticed a few nit picks, but ...

    Feb 17, 2011


Poetry is thoughts that breathe, and words that burn.
— Thomas Gray