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Re: Midnight Blue; Four
Hmm Can't wait to see who it is that has will all troubled oh and I think you should keep Veronica's POV I like having both of the POVs. :]
Oct 12, 2008 -
Re: Broken and Forgotten
gracey; Thanks so much :] On my next poem I'll try and have more feeling my the voice grimy: Yes! i got an A+ :] Haha Its okay for repeating ...
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: Midnight Blue; Three
Yey!!!!!!!!!!!! XD So will's a werewolf is he? haha well that was one of my first guesses on what he was awesome chapter
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: Midnight Blue; Two
I didn't like this as much as i like the preveous two but still I thought it was amazing XD
Oct 6, 2008 -
Re: Midnight Blue; One
Oh! my gosh this story is awesome I love the charactors they seem so well thought out and as for Will I have 5000000 ideas what i think he is ...
Oct 6, 2008 -
Re: My heart is breaking apart
wow. amazing very good wish i could write poetry like that XD
Oct 6, 2008 -
Re: The Werewolf's Bite
pshhxhoney: thanks so much!!! haha XD Kiss of life: thank you so muchh!!! I will write more soon and just to tell you i have chapter 1 up too XD
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: The Werewolf's Bite Chpt 1
Hey again! These sentences didn't quite flow well and you didn't transition the topics very well. First you're talking about how she's immune to blood and how rare she is ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: The Werewolf's Bite
Angel Of Death: Thank you so much! I just fixed that double negitive and I'm so glad you liked it so much XD
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: Destiny -- A Harry Potter short story
wow this was amazing the way you wrote it, everything was just amazing though it was a bit differant from the books such as the fact that Hermione was Harry's ...
Oct 5, 2008