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Re: Childhood Room
This is such a beautiful poem! The transition from an innocent childhood to a rough adulthood is so well written, and the comparison between the two is fascinating. This poem ...
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Re: The Civilian Pt. 1
Some works of dystopia give me chills, and this is definitely one of them. The idea of people being reduced to numbers is just so cold to me, and I ...
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Re: Fictional Dilemma
This is almost too immersive! It makes me feel personally betrayed when I read the letdowns from the comfort character in this poem... it's scary how accurate it feels. I ...
May 2, 2023 -
Re: battlefield
This is really good! The imagery and descriptions are astonishing to me. I think that it feels like the perfect balance of dramatic and bloody. It really dives deep into ...
May 2, 2023 -
Re: The Journey Beyond
This is such a beautiful poem, and I find it so interesting how you twist a typically dark topic into a positive perspective. It’s short and sweet, it really gets ...
May 2, 2023
