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Re: Love is Ignorance chapt.1
I absolutely love it. This is the best story that I've read recently. I am debating on going to the top and reading it over again maybe even ten more ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Kiss me in the rain, baby.
Omg I absolutley love this story! It is so sweet and touching. I love how you have the guy that is thre for your MC. This is now on my ...
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: Just for you.
Hey girl I'm here to review this amazing poem. I love it because it describes just what I'm going through right now. Its like you saw my situatuon from in ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: My Falling Sun 6.1 1/2
Omg I just finished reading all of your chapters for this story and all I can say is WOW! I absolutely love this story. At the very end you had ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: Remembering Emily Chapter 2 (part 2)
I really like the idea to this story. My biggest nitpick would have to be that your chapters are way to short and do not have enough description. I'm sorry ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: Remembering Emily
Omg I love this. It is so sweet and true. I can really see how much Jake cares for Emily. This is my first review in awhile so I am ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: She's such a Drama Queen Prologue
First of all Welcome to YWS! Secondly, I love your story I can't wait to go read the first chapters. This prologue shows a lot of potential and I know ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: What Girls Want~part one
Ok I really like this story. It has a good plotline and good depth in the characters. I fing it hilarious how clueless Erik is about how Audrey likes him ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: He
I absolutely love this short piece. I love how you got the emotion just right so that the reader can relate. I have nothing bad to say about it either. ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Me or him.
OMG I love your story. It is so awesome. It makes me relate to a bunch of stuff that is going on in my life. I am in love with ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Paper Hearts And Bagels Pt2
Ohh I love this story. It is so sweet. I love how your MC is dense and doesn't get the jokes that everyone nakes about her. I love how you ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Paper Hearts And Bagels Pt. 1
Omg you had me on the edge of my seat the whole time I read your story. I loved the humor throughout the story and find that I can relate ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Without You - Chapter 1
Omg I love this story. You really need to continue with it. If you don't I will hunt yu down and make you cintinue. Jk. But seriously keep writing I ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Charlie and Logan- Chapter 5
Ohh my god! You have me sitting on the edge of my seat rigt now. I can't wait or the bext chapter. I love the twist that you added even ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: Charlie and Logan- Chapter 4
You really know how to make a reader love your story. You need to wok on your organization of your cyapters a littye better. Other than that I absolutely one ...
Feb 6, 2011
