Alliaaryn5665

Hi, Haha, I love it. I want to read more! Fairwell, A.

Hi, Honesly, I didn't really enjoy this. It didn't really grasp and hold my attention nor interest. It was very well-written, though it had a few errors. The -'s and ...

Hi, I wish there was more. I want more. This is just absolutely adorable, with absolutely no errors. Good job, made me laugh and almost want to cry. Farewell, A.

Hi, This was okay, but no one wants to read blocks of writing. Break it up into chapters. There were many grammatical errors. Farewell, A.

hi, Personally, I think this didn't meet the potential that it has. I think you could've done more, but good job! It was seriously gripping and I can't wait to ...

Hi, I very much liked this, though it needs to be edited. You forgot a bunch of commas, and at the end you should delete that last sentence. Good job. ...

Hi, Thanks for the reviews! My english teachers always got mad at me for doing the period at the end of a line with dialogue. They sid just let it ...

Hi, I must say, this is really good! I really liked it! It's a charming read. While I think chpt 10-15 fit in well, Ther are all very nice. Farewell, ...

Hi, Good job. Farewell, A.

Hi, "You have anymore of those sandwhiches?" BAHAHAHAHAH!!!! That was my favorite part! Oh my goodness!! Uh, there were many grammar mistakes. Like, a lot. I liked this. On to ...

Hi, "You have anymore of those sandwhiches?" BAHAHAHAHAH!!!! That was my favorite part! Oh my goodness!! Uh, there were many grammar mistakes. Like, a lot. I liked this. On to ...

Hi, You say shit alot. All too relatable. FTW! Farewell, A.

Hi, Oh, by the way, my previous review was my way of saying you did a fantastic job! :] Few mistakes, but that's okay! Good job! Farewell, A.

Hi, Oh my. So, my war got to you? Mission successful. You are welcome. :] Farewell, A.

Hi, Wait, what? What's going on? I am so confused. I started reading this and didn't know what was going on. I still don't. It was good and all, but ...