Allessandre

Oh, I LOVE this. I'd make grammar points, but everyone else already did that. All I can say is this is awesome, keep writing

OMG OMG OMG write. more. NOW. Suspencr is killing me Aug I wish my warriors story was this good!

This ones just as good as the. prologue, better, chptr two, here I come!

I love the warriors books! I even have my own warriors fanfictiom any way this was great, off to read chptr two!

Kittens dont open there eyes as soon as they are born, they live for a few weeks with their eyes closed, I know from experience that kittens walk around alot ...

Heres the link to chptr 1

OH, duh. Arent I smart?

Thats funny, I agree with the other commenters though. Alles

I sang this while listening to the song and its PERFECT i hope you make more parodies!!!

I LOVE your parodies, its like, you just know how to make every song HILARIOSE, I sang it as i read and it fit perfectly: likes

I wrote this randomly and have NO idea whatsoever what to do with it!!! Help!

I LOVED this, I'm laughing so hard right now! I'm going to try and sing the words next time I hear it. That must have taken a lot of imagination. ...

I love this story, I was expecting for her fiance to come tto her appartment and see the ring on the bathroom counter and know something was going on. I ...

That was really good, I've read the whole thing. I wish I could write romantic fiction but I suck when I do, guess I just have to stick to fantasy!

I'm starting to review, and your reviews are helping. Look for a story called Wolves of Stone Hollow, I can't give you a link because I'm in a touch phone ...