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Re: Flowers in the sky.
I love this poems so much.
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: Lune
I love this poem so much, it kept me from the first word to the last word, my favorite line was The sun is dead. I don't know why, but ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: Happiness
I love this poem, my favorite line stanza was It’s like a matchboxStruck in your chest, Yet cool like rain.On heated breath it stood out to me. Keep writing like ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: The Dev Files
I love the poem although it's a little bit long for me to understand and stay focused on, I know poems can be any length but I had trouble staying ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: You Are Like A Riddle to Me
I like the poem other than I didn't quit understand it, maybe it's the language that was used but other than that I loved it
Dec 7, 2011 -
Re: That's So Gay!
I like this because it's true. I have nothing else to say.
Dec 7, 2011 -
Re: To a Good Friend
I love this poems so much, it is so true for most best friends and it almost made me cry just because it's so happy and true.
Dec 7, 2011 -
Re: Can't say that I love you
I love how you used a different pattern on both sides left i added in 9,8,9,10. And on the lines on the right i did 6, 8, 6, 8 I ...
Dec 7, 2011 -
Re: The Snow.
I love the poem but I was just wondering why the I in icicles is bold and the n in land is bold unless you're trying to spell something out. ...
Dec 7, 2011 -
Re: Winter Air
I love this poem, but I'd try not to use words that make people run to a dictionary, for example 'Gaia' and Lavished. Other than that I love it and ...
Dec 7, 2011 -
Re: I need help with this one.
First, it dpends on what you're trying to make a point of in the poem is it war or is it peace this doesn't rhym but it might fit in ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Heart-To-Heart
I loved this, the constant back and forth between two hearts, it was great. I have nothing else to say other than keep writing like this, it's amazing.
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Summer
Great poem, I love that you used a haiku, I find it very hard to write haiku's but it looks like it's is easy to you.
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: Life
I loved this, there are a lot of descriptory words used and that makes it interesting to me keep up the good work!!
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: A Single Rose
This poem grabbed me from the beginning, Now, our rose so red, is wilted and dead this was my favorite line of the whole poem, I think you should keep ...
Dec 1, 2011
