AliyahPillage

I love the poem, it was really great, just a few pointers, That’s what it feels like when you have no control and mo meaning you spelled no wrong, there ...

I loved the poem in general. The colors didn't make much sense to me but maybe you had a point to them, my favorite part was the red in the ...

I enjoyed reading the whole poem, I'm going to say this and I don't want to sound weird but the title sort of made me think of zombies and when ...

I love this poem, the first line really caught me and kept me up until the last word, my favorite stanza was The night brings a chill, peace will be ...

This poem is AMAZING I love it, just one thing, and a short trip to the hospital for stitches . I finished white, the tube rolled up like empty toothpaste ...

I like the idea of the poem but some of it was hard to understand, 102; numbers flash too much, too much rubbing sleep from red eyes slipping on ratty ...

First off, the poem didn't make much sense to me, there were a lot of spelling mistakes for example 'another' and 'friend' are spelled wrong multiple times throughout the poem, ...

I like the poem one thing I found though It soothes your senses if you’ve worked too never falters in showing you the path this is the only stanza that ...

I really like this poem. One thing I did notice though was You left some footprints behind on my heart; you were the only reason of my life maybe the ...

I love the whole poem in general but my favorite line was My thoughts don't quite sound right I don't know why, maybe it's because thoughts don't usually sound right ...

I loved this poem, it showed how the person felt and it made the reader (Me) feel the same way. I love how it shows the anger, if that's not ...

This was great, the only thing I found If you'd only let me free I think you should stick to the title and say If you'd only set me free ...

I liked the poem because it describes things one thing I did notice was you wrote Out the corner of my eye. maybe putting and of between out and the ...

I loved the work because I was in the peom from the first word I just found something that didn't make much sense to me And Gived them the emphy ...