Aliicide

Hello! I worked on the way I'm addressing in each paragraph so it won't be confusing because thanks to you I realized that. I changed the story quite radically, I ...

Hello! Thank you very much for your review! I was unable to see beyond my first impression and almost everything you said makes sense. I can say that my "short ...

This is a nice story, but I think it's more of a blog post. Your writing is quite good and I felt like you were rushing. We only got a ...

Hello! Thank you for this comprehensive review. I'll surely take into account all of your advice. About the idea being limited, it is because the contest was requesting 250 words ...

Hello! Thanks for the encouragements and for the advice. I will surely take another look on this piece and on those run-on sentences.

Hello! Thank you very much for your review. I really appreciate it.

Thank you very much. I really appreciate the advice and your time.

Your review is highly appreciated. I like seeing people who understand my works, even though this is just a random thought I felt the need to vent and not necessarily ...

Thank you for the review. I'll consider being more clear the next time I post something like this.

Thank you very much for this complex review. I now can see the abiguity in my essay. I did't really noticed this, maybe because for me everything was clear. As ...