AliceInWonderland

Thanks so much for your reviews. I'm going to try to work with your feedback!

I totally come to feel what you feel when reading this poem. But you kind of leave me wondering about the last three lines. Care to elaborate?

Lovely. I wonder how you came up with this one. What inspired you? I agree with LaurynMitchell on the second stanza. Maybe replace little with another word? All in all, ...

Beautiful poem. Oh, how men burn before her gaze! They suffer so completely, That just fits. Beautiful!

Thank you so very much! I will take in your suggestions and I've always had difficulty with punctuation in my poems, so thanks for that too!