AliceFairfield

I haven't read the previous chapters yet, but this chapter is amazing even without readers' prior knowledge. Your writing style is wonderfully descriptive. It feels like the scene in this ...

The suspense in this chapter is great. I personally found the soldier to be a discriminatory, rude idiot. If that's not how you meant to portray him, then please excuse ...

Indeed, who says we have to be anything? I personally find the "favorite food" and "favorite color" questions weird myself. We could have more than one of each. Your poem ...

I'm afraid I'm not a good reviewer...But I've just got to say this. You're awesome. If you watched anime while growing up, wrote fanfics, self insert novels, and can recognize ...

This is a wonderful re-telling of Cinderella. I liked the names you chose for the stepsisters, and the backstory you imagined for them and their mother seemed like a good ...

I really enjoyed reading this short story. It felt like a convincing winter scene, with a grandmother telling her grandchild a story about a local mountain before bed. I especially ...

This poem was a bit confusing to read, in a good way. It really felt like I was seeing someone's dream. Perhaps this is only because I'm not a good ...

Skye's reaction to her housing burning is...bizarre at the very least. Chris is a lot braver than I thought. I really like the way you wrote this chapter. The action ...

Please correct me if I'm wrong, but I feel that this poem is about unrequited love. The woman doesn't seem to know that the man loves her to the point ...

"You are not easy" is the line I like best in this poem. I really enjoyed the way you used the changing seasons to describe scenes in the lovers' life ...

This is a very short scene, so there's not much readers can comment on. But the dialogue between Kaila and her mother seems natural so far. Kaila's mother gives off ...

This kind of incident happens often online. Everyday, actually. It's hard to tell who's safe to be friends with and who's not online, since in person contact usually never happens. ...

Chris' father gives great advice. ^^ Introverts and extroverts have their own ways of socializing and communicating, and he's right when he tells Chris that his only job is to ...

The stanzas of this poem flow really well. And I like the themes of sacrifice and saying farewell addressed here. I especially love the verses, "When all the earth has ...

I love the nature-related imagery used in this poem. The second half stands put to me especially. "Caressing hands" fits the "Affection" title very well.^^ Since this poem is rather ...