Alice

Well, this took me by surprise. Congradulations, not very many things can do that! Trust me too, it was a good surprise. I like how it rambles and the whole ...

Zombie's not my thing but I love the cover art!

Lol, that wasn't really the whole point, but I suppose it could be.

Not much of a poet but I liked this poem. It had a really nice beat, and theme, and the ending I particularly liked. Just thought I'd pass a bit ...

I would make comments but I was too busy laughing to think of anything. And I suck at scripts anyways. Lawl.

The pregnancy didn't really turn me just disturbed me a LOT. I did like how Edward fainted though, that made me laugh.

Tick Tock Odd Thomas Phantoms

Hey! I had a draft saved for half of this from the 28th, thanks a lot for the re-write. :roll: But that's okay, it caught my interest enough the first ...

(That's actually coming up, I'm going from POV to POV every other part)

Good poem Jared, it made me sad.

I liked it, it was very confusing though. I loved the vivid imagery though.

This is very origional! Being origional is hard to do anymore. It was a little repetitive with the "maybe it's just me" line but it didn't make it annoying. It ...

Or bookstore or library.

I changed the end to make it less confusing, they way I wrote it was probably what confused people.

dose "does" dear with a bat "with a baseball bat" sounds better, and put that all in italics. a fucking Rhino swear words can be useful in the right places. ...