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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: dementia

    Hiya! I like your work very much! :) The narration and explanation is very well written which makes it such a great poem. The verse seems a little far with ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Me and my loneliness

    You and Your Loneliness (not the exact title, but for ownership rights), for me, is a very good example of "wooing" poems. They sing of love. But the special note ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Silver heart

    I simply love it! :) It says so much of how love can always be there for us. It's some quite of love story and also a poem. Just wondering ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: An Evening with a Vegan

    It's in times like this that I take much consideration to being a Vegan... In what I've just read, I feel not making any critiques. From your tone, your not ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: the fall

    I love literary works about months! Hi, this is Al! :) I would like to shout out that you touched my feelings as you've let out how a month can ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Numbers

    Shhhiiinnnny....oh, hello, Silver! Just want to say I noticed your fine luster today! The other thing I wanted to say is that I was quite satisfied with your work. I ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Witch's

    Greetings Fresh Meat! Typing in your name made me hungry.... Getting back to the point. I am a fan of witches. Not in the "I-believe-that-devils-are-so-powerful" way, but in a curious ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Does wisdom make you strong?

    Hi Ms. Amber! :) At first, I was intrigued in your poem's title. This was the reason I checked it out. As I read it, I had a few grins ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: This Winter

    Cold, very cold. What're you doing this winter? Anyways, great poem. The solemnity of the drear it exudes easily fits with the harshness you mention in the poem. The length ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Deleted 23

    Hiya! Your poem is great, that's why I'm here! So that's all. I liked how your words exemplified things so colorfully and imaginatively, but still staying in the emotional, frozen ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Underneath Your Skin

    What a nice song to read aloud in the morning, mist. (Pun not intended :) ) I like how you put coldness and frailty into the verses without taking out ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Script » General, General Re: Flimsy

    Good day, Ms. Amy, About your script. I've read a few scripts now, but I think this is one of the best. Why? It's because of its easy relevance to ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: passenger seat

    Hiyah! Your post, the Passenger Seat, is a very good of example of poems that leaves its readers shock, then delivers a finishing blow that makes the reader feel disturbed ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Pull the Trigger

    So, did you really pull the trigger? Kidding! :) I like how depressing your poem is. Simply reading it made me feel sad, it made me give in. You made ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Mainstream

    Hello, Story Weaver. Did you know that I'm called Dream Weaver? Just want to say how are monikers are quite related. Anyways, I really like your poem! As in really. ...

    Dec 11, 2011


I wonder if people felt the freedom in our culture to love louder, if they'd be quicker to say "I miss you" when the absence of someone is felt instead of just thinking it.
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