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Re: CinderAllen. Chapter 5.
Hey! Great work! This is wonderful! Lemme give you a Kudos Revue for this one! So, I really liked the first few chapters of the novel but I haven't exactly ...
Jan 29, 2012 -
Re: Currently Untitled
HI Rachel! Yeah, I saw your warning, and I saw your F word. Lemme give a Kudos Revue for this one! Great lyrics! I detect the pattern here in the ...
Jan 28, 2012 -
Re: In The Eyes Of A Druid
Hello Emmy! Alfred here, for a Quick Critique! I love fantasy fiction, it seems...very fantastic! Anyways, here is my review of your work: Concept & Theme : :D :D :D ...
Jan 28, 2012 -
Re: The Demon Dream
Hello! Alfred here for a comment on your post! First and most important of all, I think you got this post wrong, kind sir. This is for poetry. And your ...
Jan 27, 2012 -
Re: You Should Have Chosen A Good School
Hello, dear. Alfred here for an Editor's Note! I simply love reading magazine articles. They're in the middle of Newspaper-strict and Short Story-free. They're features, in other words. Before I ...
Jan 27, 2012 -
Re: Somnium
"I dream of a genie of light brown hair." Well, that's what I can say about dreams. Here's what I can say for your poem , Somnium. Here's Al for ...
Jan 25, 2012 -
Re: Edward Cullen/Viagra Parody
'Should I be concerned' ---- funniest line :D Dear, I would like to say that you have that you have a knack at humor! I love the way you put ...
Jan 23, 2012 -
Re: Wonder Why 9/11
HI! Alfred here for a musical Kudos Revue! I simply adore your lyric, dear! It has this great sense that isn't about loving your partner, but loving each other in ...
Jan 21, 2012 -
Re: True Confessions of a Heartless Girl by Martha Brooks
BLAST! Y'know why I did that? Because you made a great opening line yourself! Hi! This is Alfred Symon, for a Kudos Revue! As I've said, a big WOW was ...
Jan 21, 2012 -
Re: Why Books Are Wonderful
A big " Hello! " to you! Books are wonderful! And so is reading! Whether we read old yellowed novels or environmentally published references, the wonder of the word will ...
Jan 21, 2012 -
Re: Addiction
Hi! Al here for a Quick Critique! Are you high? Well, because your poem is! And it's making me crazy! Clam down, calm down. Okay, now that I'm low again, ...
Jan 18, 2012 -
Re: Living Color
Hi! I never thought anyone would be drunk by writing! And so I took interest in reading this poem! Concept & Theme : :D :D :D :D I love the ...
Jan 15, 2012 -
Re: The Eye That Protects You Whilst Asleep
Reading this piece's title, I felt very uneasy. Having an eye with me when I sleep is very creepy...But that doesn't mean I won't give a Quick Critique! Concept & ...
Jan 9, 2012 -
Re: Trapped
Hi! I was trapped in my room, so I whiled my hour by reading your work! This is Al for a Quick Critique! Concept & Theme : :D :D :D ...
Jan 8, 2012 -
Re: .
Hi Puck! So this is Alfred for a Kudos Review! It's quite hard to review a review, but I think that your review is worth my review ;) I've never ...
Jan 8, 2012
