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AlfredSymon

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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: CinderAllen. Chapter 5.

    Hey! Great work! This is wonderful! Lemme give you a Kudos Revue for this one! So, I really liked the first few chapters of the novel but I haven't exactly ...

    Jan 29, 2012
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Currently Untitled

    HI Rachel! Yeah, I saw your warning, and I saw your F word. Lemme give a Kudos Revue for this one! Great lyrics! I detect the pattern here in the ...

    Jan 28, 2012
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: In The Eyes Of A Druid

    Hello Emmy! Alfred here, for a Quick Critique! I love fantasy fiction, it seems...very fantastic! Anyways, here is my review of your work: Concept & Theme : :D :D :D ...

    Jan 28, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Demon Dream

    Hello! Alfred here for a comment on your post! First and most important of all, I think you got this post wrong, kind sir. This is for poetry. And your ...

    Jan 27, 2012
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: You Should Have Chosen A Good School

    Hello, dear. Alfred here for an Editor's Note! I simply love reading magazine articles. They're in the middle of Newspaper-strict and Short Story-free. They're features, in other words. Before I ...

    Jan 27, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Somnium

    "I dream of a genie of light brown hair." Well, that's what I can say about dreams. Here's what I can say for your poem , Somnium. Here's Al for ...

    Jan 25, 2012
  • Script » General, General Re: Edward Cullen/Viagra Parody

    'Should I be concerned' ---- funniest line :D Dear, I would like to say that you have that you have a knack at humor! I love the way you put ...

    Jan 23, 2012
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Wonder Why 9/11

    HI! Alfred here for a musical Kudos Revue! I simply adore your lyric, dear! It has this great sense that isn't about loving your partner, but loving each other in ...

    Jan 21, 2012
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: True Confessions of a Heartless Girl by Martha Brooks

    BLAST! Y'know why I did that? Because you made a great opening line yourself! Hi! This is Alfred Symon, for a Kudos Revue! As I've said, a big WOW was ...

    Jan 21, 2012
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Why Books Are Wonderful

    A big " Hello! " to you! Books are wonderful! And so is reading! Whether we read old yellowed novels or environmentally published references, the wonder of the word will ...

    Jan 21, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Addiction

    Hi! Al here for a Quick Critique! Are you high? Well, because your poem is! And it's making me crazy! Clam down, calm down. Okay, now that I'm low again, ...

    Jan 18, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Living Color

    Hi! I never thought anyone would be drunk by writing! And so I took interest in reading this poem! Concept & Theme : :D :D :D :D I love the ...

    Jan 15, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Eye That Protects You Whilst Asleep

    Reading this piece's title, I felt very uneasy. Having an eye with me when I sleep is very creepy...But that doesn't mean I won't give a Quick Critique! Concept & ...

    Jan 9, 2012
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Trapped

    Hi! I was trapped in my room, so I whiled my hour by reading your work! This is Al for a Quick Critique! Concept & Theme : :D :D :D ...

    Jan 8, 2012
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: .

    Hi Puck! So this is Alfred for a Kudos Review! It's quite hard to review a review, but I think that your review is worth my review ;) I've never ...

    Jan 8, 2012


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