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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The True Mighty Emperor of the Zanrel- Chapters 1 and 2

    GG! Are you sure you still need my reviews with all of these great reviews from other people? Hahaha! Well, I'll give one anyway, even a short precise one! And ...

    Jun 2, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Love me as I am now

    Ikie! Sorry for the super late review! But I'll give one to make it up! Oh, wait, I will give one whatever happens! Sometimes all these reviews make me crazy! ...

    Jun 2, 2012
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Hawk

    Vyper! I CAN'T HELP IT; I NEED TO SAY THAT YOUR PIECE IS GREAT! No really :) I fell in love with this slice-of-scene story about openness and yearning, retribution ...

    Jun 2, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Title Pending

    Dude McGuy! My man! My co-Kain fan! Final Fantasy IV is one of my most favorite games in the series :) I personally like Palom! Well enough with the FF ...

    Jun 2, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Lucifer'Spawn- Chapter 1 Part 2

    Summy! I'm very sorry for the super late review, as in sorrryyyy! But here am I for the Special Revue! So, I read the half and half chapter, and there ...

    Jun 2, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Spring Storm Symphony

    Angel! Sorry for the laaaaate review! But here I am! A :) So, instead of a Quick Critique, I'll give a structured review. Here I go: SUBJECT: Wonderful! An antonymous ...

    May 28, 2012
  • Short Story » Horror, Realistic Re: Can I slice the chicken this time?(WARNING: This story is not nice, it is sick and disturbing)

    Evie! I'm so sorry for the wretchedly late review :( ! But here I am now! Better late than never! I hope this will still serve useful since there are ...

    May 27, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Like A Butterfly Spring--- Chap. 1

    Shootster! I'm here for the review! I'm like late, for a month, but here it is, and I hope it would still help! So, the psychotic death of a relative, ...

    May 24, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Parallel Realm : The Conjurer Wars - 1

    Artsy-Tartsy! Sorry for my super late reviews! To make it up, I'll make a super special review in which I'll be focusing more on grammar, word choice and the other ...

    May 15, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Sun Children V - The Princess' Crown - Chapter One

    Hi Ash! Sorry for the month-late review! I've been VERY busy with my non-writer life and so I haven't given any reviews since your work. But here it is, better ...

    May 9, 2012
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: Constellation Myths

    Hiya The Boss! Sorry if I'm late, but here is my review! Point Out is a bit for the beginner's side, and since you like a close eye, I'll give ...

    Apr 5, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Other Re: Harlequin

    Hey Tiny D! Al here for a Quick Critique! So, a lyric on Harlequin, well, I simply love clowning around! The shimmer and glimmer of the circus amazes me! Let's ...

    Apr 4, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Science Fiction Re: The IFS Endeavor - Chapter 1

    Hey! It's me Al for a Quick Critique! For more information on my reviews, pay a visit to my Clinic down below in my signature; be sure to recommend it ...

    Mar 27, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Ray of Hope

    Heya Devan! What a wonderfully touching story you got here :) It's really great! Well, let's save the comments later, 'cause I'll hit you up with a Quick Critique! For ...

    Mar 22, 2012
  • Script » Film, Humor Re: Three Fried Mice

    Heya Peanut! This is Al giving a Kudos Revue! For more information on the various reviews I give, check out my Clinic! The link is below in my signature! Be ...

    Mar 18, 2012


[as a roleplayer is feeling sad about torturing her characters] GrandWild: "You're a writer, dear. Embrace it."
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