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It's not that the reader might be able to see us. It is that the reader might be able to witness us hide how nervous we are about posting stuff. ...

EXTR... Taction extrtaction... -pokes peom-

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It was intentional.

I can't take credit for the style. Repeating the verses, the pattern, and the rhyme scheme are all a part of what make it a villanelle.

I'd like to hear from you still, if you don't mind?

I'm a little confused by your review. Why did you end it so abruptly? What do you mean by fly always being at the end? As a villanelle, I have ...

I'm having a hard time deciding if I really like this poem for all the techniques, tricks, and mystery, or if I don't like it. The main problem I'm having ...

Hey Dark. Nice to hear from you

I don't know who that is...

None of this is a foreign language. However, I disagree with you. When I was learing stressed-unstressed syllables there were three criteria we could use: First, it was stressed in ...

I'd really like to know how you use a long dash in writing. What sort of rules do you apply with it? Do you have a specific set of functions ...

Thank you for writing so much about two lines. I would like you to know that I did spend a lot of time trying to put this together just how ...

I'm glad you did this, it will be useful to keep these in mind when I go into writing other dream-like sequences and reworking this one.