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Re: tracing bedsheets
Good Lord Mary. I love these lines: you plucked my heartstrings as if it were your violin and the melancholy melody of my moods wafted through the air on a ...
May 10, 2014 -
Re: deleted
Hello again! I've got some more exact nitpicks for this one. I pushed through the bush in near silence. Though the trees clawed at me, restraining me, willing me to ...
May 10, 2014 -
Re: deleted
I really like this change in the story. I feel like she's finally coming around to the senses of someone who is in one of these novels, skipping out on ...
May 9, 2014 -
Re: Hiaku-like poem
Hey Z, Nice to see you're still at the grinding block. I'm glad to see a new poetic work come out of you. That being said, I feel like the ...
May 9, 2014 -
Re: Call Me Sober
Hey Tenyo This poem kind of makes me feel sick to the stomach, which is what a car crash should make you feel like, so you did a really great ...
May 8, 2014 -
Re: deleted
Hello! I'm back for a second shot at this story of yours. This girl is really odd. Personally if I was seeing creepy stuff and my mom vanished, I'd be ...
May 6, 2014 -
Re: Letters
Hey Raven, This isn't the first poem of yours that I've read, and I doubt it will be the last. So I didn't catch on to this being acrostic until ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: deleted
Hello! This has been in the Green Room for far too long! Green Room Knight Aley here to solve that problem. I'm not much of a novelist and I haven't ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: Prakfura Raiders: Chapter Two: Pecking Order: Part Three {Redacted}
I'm not sure I've left you a review before, but since it's review day for the next few hours and I've been reading along due to the pestering that's well ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Paper Hearts
I know this is kind of an old thing for me to review. You posted this to be reviewed a while ago and I'm just getting around to it obscenely ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: A Well of Memories - Part 3
This is a review about posting poetry in general more than posting this poem because it is not yours, so I can't really say much about it, as Iggy pointed ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: A Dark Look at Crimea
Because this is not your article, it's going to be sort of hard to review, so I'll instead review the clarity to an English reader. This will probably be pretty ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: The art of life
Hi Laure, you asked me to help you make this a better poem, so here I am In chat I gave you a good idea about the basic things I'm ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: Just Another Boy (tentative title)
Hello~ First thing to admit, I don't have much musical talent so I can't really base it off of any sounds that might end up being how this is sung. ...
Apr 5, 2014 -
Re: Tolerance
Hey Lucrezia, Aley here. This is going to be hard to review because of the content. Making an argument that you're never right is kind of like saying 'I dare ...
Apr 5, 2014
