Aley

Hey guys! So reading this I know you tried to keep with the beat but a couple spots had too many syllables to work well for a child's nursery rhyme, ...

Hey Raven Riters. First a couple nitpicks so that's out of the way when we get to the real review. Spun sounds better then span because a span is like ...

Hey Ohmyhugo, Welcome to YWS! I though this was a really good way to start at the idea and work through the idea. Overall you keep the rhythm the same ...

Hm. Hi Gravity, Aley here to review whatever this is. hmm. Alright, so since this is one of the first times, if not the first time I've reviewed your work ...

Hey Written Girl 46 My name's Aley and I'm here to review your poem. First off, I'd like to say that you don't have to apologize for what you want ...

Hello! So this is my first time reading your story and so far I really like how you've got it written. You're not shying away from showing things, and you're ...

Hello! First chapter read and I don't know if another one will cross the desk or not, so here it goes. I find it really interesting that you're crossing the ...

Hello! I really liked the idea behind this poem, that when fairy tales are created they're labeled and put together in a way that allows the reader to have a ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS. I'm Aley, and I'll be reviewing your poem today. First thing first, since this is your first poem on YWS and I'm probably one of the ...

Hello! My names Aley and I'm here to review you today. First off, welcome to YWS! I really like the direction you're trying to take this poem. Some of the ...

Hey BookWolf! This is actually the first poem I've read of yours, and being that it is a riddle, I'm not going to be completely critiquing it as I would ...

Hey Love, So I like most of it. I think it's a different direction then what I would have expected from a poem this title, but that's mostly because I ...

Hi DarkBunneh13! My name's Aley and I'll be your reviewer today so buckle up and sit back. We're in for the long haul this time. First off I'd like to ...

Hi Eveningstar, I'm glad to see you've been doing some reviewing! I'm here to review you because your work was in the green room and we like to get things ...

Hello! This has been in the green room for way too long. Okay, so here are my reading comments. He blinked when Obi flipped a switch and dull lights flickered ...