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Hello again! So I think you've got a bit better emotional output in the second stanza area where you're talking about what "you" do in this one. Compared to the ...

Yo! You said you didn't care about me being harsh, which makes these easier to write. This is the first one I read. Personally I think you're way overdoing it ...

Hey ACM, It's nice to see new faces on YWS! Being that you are new, I'm going to go ahead and provide you with the reviewing guideline I use when ...

Hello supZ, Welcome to YWS! I'm glad you joined us. I'm going to be following this style of review if you want to take a look at the article to ...

I'm here to give you a review for the Review the Person Above You thread so I'm going to do a line review which is easier for me on chapters. ...

Hey XJupiter, So I'd like to start by saying Hello. We've seen each other a bit on chat but never in this situation, so I'm here to finally review something ...

Hello Hippyhoodrat, I'm here to give you a review so buckle up because we're in for a ride together. First off, I'd like to say that I think you've got ...

Hello Selena1016, I might be a little late to the game, but I'm going to post this here anyway just so you have the information. First off, I think you ...

Hey MissGangamsh, Aley here to review this ancient piece, sorry it took so long to get a review on it! To make up for it, I'm going to go through ...

Hello, TriSARAHtops. So I think you've got some good things going on here with the way you're breaking this down into multiple sections. I think that's probably on the right ...

Hello! Happy September Review Month! First off I'd like to say that I really think you've got a good knack of line and stanzas down. I like to see that ...

Hello! I think you've got a very good idea and talent here in the end part of your poem. You've got a good flow of words, good description, apt language ...

Hey Paula08, I'm here to answer your summons to review this. Sorry it's so late. First off I'd like to say that I like how short you're keeping this. From ...

Hm. Okay, so back like, a while ago, you asked me how to improve this, I'm here with my response: Simplify. Basically you've got a really good voice, good sections, ...

Hey DivineFool, I really like that you are connecting something trivial like a game on the phone with something more profound like life. You've got a good direction that you're ...