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Hey Ruro, I wanted something to review DX what are you giving me? I really like that you're playing with formatting, but you do this sort of thing a lot. ...

Hey, here's a link to a thread that will help you format poetry on here in the future. So I really like that you didn't bog this down with punctuation, ...

More love poems. I like it, again. You did a good job with the language. I think the rhyme is sort of getting in your way again here. You really ...

Hey Charizard, Nice to see you again. So basically I think what's going on in this is that you're a bit too out of syncopation with reality. In my experience ...

Hey Charizard, Awwww this is adorable

Never fear! A fix is here. You don't need stars to make stanzas. I haven't tossed this into any of my other reviews so here you go. See, here you ...

Hello, This is cute, but a bit overdone for a poem. I mean, I like how you had the overall life/death/seasons thing in a new way to write it, but ...

Hello Charizard! We don't talk much so I'm going to basically explain why I keep popping up on your poems. I'm reviewing most of them because I'm trying to get ...

Hello again, I'm not really going to comment on content for this one since it is a translation work and I'm not sure if you wrote the original in Afrikaans ...

Hey Conjurer, Astral recommended I review all of your stuff because I'm going to finish NaRevMo in like two days and I'm looking for things to review so here I ...

Hey NicolMemo, I like that you aren't afraid of using layout and white space in poetry. I think I probably would have put "I jumped" at the end of the ...

LOST! You have a poem

Hey Cole, I think the only way I can describe this is visceral. Perfect word for a poem. I really like how the poem doesn't really hold any punches about ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS. Since you're new, I'm going to go ahead and show you the guide I'm going to be using to make this critique for your poem. Hopefully ...