Alexxa

Hi! You're only thirteen but I can sense too much passion already. Dreams are there to dream no matter how long or how tough they seem to achieve. This has ...

Purple is my favorite color, too! Surely, this means so much to you (the writer), and so allow me to congratulate you. Every literary work is a masterpiece for the ...

Hi there, Wicked! I really like this is a very good start. I never listen when my mom yells at me. Her eyes are bloodshot , her thin brown hair ...

Hi! I think this is actually the first 2nd person story I've read. And I don't see why I shouldn't like it. It has mystery to the person narrating. How ...

Hey! I had so much fun with it. although, I wished there was more. Part 2 anywhere? Oh, it's a short story! Sorry, for that! Anyway, I loved the gentle ...

Hi! I definitely agree with the others that your writing is fabulous! In this genre, only proper descriptive words can make it more appealing-which you did! So, Congratulations! It is ...

Hi! I'm so excited to review this one today! You were just a little nobody in the school, (after the comma should be a space. Same goes with periods.) you ...

Hi! Glad to have found this one! I really enjoyed it! The story is very interesting and would be most likely read by male teens. The dialogues are lively and ...

Hi! Too short! Anyway, please allow me to give a few points. He pulled his hand from the threadbare curtain and let it fall “good bye Fire bird” he whispered ...

Hi, I'll be happy to give my insights. First point, I love sad stories, especially tragic ones. Secondly, I agree with the first reviewer that the character shouldn't be perfect. ...

Hi there! What can I say? It's more than wonderful! Like most of the reviewers, I loved the opening paragraph! The way you combined those words together and came up ...

Wow. So I see, you're sixteen and in love. That's nice. Through the simple yet meaningful words you used, I can easily tell your emotions. I'm not really very good ...