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AlexandraBurton

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Shh.

    Oh, lovely. I am officially in love with this story. It's well written, and moves with a ease I haven't seen in other places. Since those grammar Nazis up there ...

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Blackened Runes - Chapter Two

    Heyyy. So I liked this too. Yep, now the 'young master' does seem a lot like Artemis - a shyer, older Arty, but Arty all the same. This household deals ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Blackened Runes - Chapter One

    [worships it] I love it! I don't know why, exactly. maybe it's because the 'employer' reminds me so much of Artemis Fowl. I love Artemis Fowl. I don't have much ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The End

    It's not a bad story, but I could see several errors... The whole screen went black, then an alarm went off and red letters appeared, "The Earth has tilted off ...

    Mar 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Traces

    I like this. It's emotional but not fluffy. You seem to have free-written at times, and that gives me the feel of a poetess who is trying to cope with ...

    Mar 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Favorites Hurt

    Heya. Fellow n00b here. It's clear what your emotions are, and they are raw. That's one thing I like about this poem. :) The poem is structured in couplets, which ...

    Mar 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Diluted

    Hey. I don't really like the poem, but that might be my natural apathy towards poems that condemn present civilization. Oops. The meter is irregular, the rhymes break off in ...

    Mar 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: More than friends?

    Short and sweet, bookcutie. ... That username is really sweet. :D I don't have a lot to say - is that okay? It rhymes without breaking a sweat, but I ...

    Mar 18, 2011


See, we could have been called The Shoes.
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