AlessiosDream

Hello mate, I enjoy the concept and think that this could be a potential stellar read. I think that it can be improved with minor revision - never over-write, it's ...

Hello LittleLee, I'd like to leave a few thoughts on your work. I liked the flow, it felt good to read. The way you formatted your piece made it easy ...

Hello. I enjoyed reading your work. It was both sensory and rhythmically pleasing to read. My favourite line, "My man takes my hand, and pulls me through the doorway, smelling ...

Hello. I'm Alessio. I read your poem and although I didn't find it scary, I do think that your poem has potential to become an experimental piece, perhaps exploring our ...