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  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Elephant baby

    Oh, you got so confused right there! XD The whole poem is: When i step on the elephant baby, i can touch the ceiling, maybe. The one you didn't understand ...

    Jun 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Elephant baby

    I'm glad you think so, I was lovable kid! xD

    Jun 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Amalia: the little garden gnome Chapter 1

    it's edited!

    Jun 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Elephant baby

    Awww, this is so sweet! :D And hey, isn't the thing with poetry that one can't read too deep into it. Everyone can feel it the way they want. :)

    Jun 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Elephant baby

    To call one an Elric-like genius, there is no greater praise! :D I'm glad you read it, and your review was really great! :)

    Jun 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Elephant baby

    Ohhhhh! You really didn't have to think this through this much! I really appreciate it though! Your ideas are strange...and realy awesome! :D For a second, I could imagine the ...

    Jun 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Elephant baby

    Remembering this made my day! :D

    Jun 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 1

    Since now I know how to quote in the reviews, I will point out a single typo which was fun for me since it could mean more than one thing ...

    Jun 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Siege, Chapter two:Failure (part 2/3)

    First of all, I'm sorry I didn't reply earlier, but I SWEAR it didn't show up in notifications! I'm really glad of how what i intended to show reached the ...

    Jun 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Siege, Prologue: Insane?

    You can call me however you feel like. ^^ No worries, this was useful to me, i edited alot of mistakes thanks to grammar reviews and it also helps me ...

    May 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Siege, Chapter two: Failure (part 1/3)

    Hey, thanks for reading! Some great nitpicks you gave me, i will edit them all as soon as i have some spare time. You noticed i never gave you any ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Siege, Chapter two: Failure (part 1/3)

    Hello, thanks for reaching the end! :) Now i see that it's not clear enough who is talking in the other half of the chapter(at first), so thanks for that, ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Siege, Chapter one:No chance to succeed

    You are doing quite a job here, and you can't guess how thankful I am! My first language is serbian, and we never capitalize I so It's hard for me ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Siege, Chapter one:No chance to succeed

    Heey, thanks for comming back! Yell? Never! You are free to review this as long as you like it, so don't feel obliged to review, please! :) Capitalizing I hurts ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Siege, Prologue: Insane?

    Thank you for reading and the review! Nitpicks are useful, thank you. But i can't help myself, i have to explain why i did puntuation as i did. When i ...

    May 25, 2014


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