Alchemist

Hey, thanks for the review! I'm sorry that you had to read an unedited story, but there are few reasons really: I'm not native english speaker, so I think I ...

Hey! You've gone through it all, thats awesome! I think answering on each of these will just spam you, so I decided to just post the 'thanks' here. Your reviews ...

Ehh, reading "Alchy" makes me giggle every time. xDDD Thanks for the clarity nitpicks, and also really good advices and feedback. I can't wait to have some time to sit ...

Hey again! Thanks for your awesome reviews and for spending your time with this. :) Yeah...carry. I will need to be carefull with picking my words. You give me some ...

Thanks for the awesome review! :) I'm really glad you're giving me your impression of the story, it actually helps so much since I can understand what the reader will ...

Ohhh, I really didn't notice that little repetition. Surely chapter doesn't really need both of these. :P Why the water is corrosive, everyone knows(algae). How it became like that, nobody ...

Ahh, the god damn arcticles, I think I've given up on them. They just make no sense to me. I will get a friend who's studying english to edit my ...

Hm, thanks for reading it. :) I've been getting a different views on my naming so far, but there is a reason why every place has such a sterile name. ...

Hey, thanks for your review! This nitpick list will be really, really helpful to me. This one sentence you said was cliche, well I agree but isn't it what any ...

Thanks for reading, and I'm amazed you read through it all! I actually enjoyed writing this very much. Actually, (you can learn this from the previous chapters) Shael is much ...

Hey! Thanks for the very detailed nitpicking, I'm truly thankful. I'm glad the thing you underlined there was the change within Hashi. I think I will work on this more, ...

Hey, once again, thanks for reading and review! :) As I've said, this is really raw. Hashi isn't supposed to be a paradox, he is supposed to have been following ...

Hi there! I think you overlooked that this is only a part two of the chapter. So what I did makes sense. Also, there wasn't really any action concerning these ...

Just a quick reply: thanks for your review, it is really amazing. It is both really helpful and well makes me giggle sometimes(oh you! xD) What I wanted to reply ...

Hmm, I don't think it was bad, but this single sentece seemed significantly worse then the rest of the story. Maybe its just me. It's good that I only caught ...