Alchemist

Thanks for the review!

Hah! No, there will be more to it, these stories were mostly the introductions :D

Hey, I totally appreciate the harsh review, the truth is I didn't put hella lot of work in this anyway! :D

Uhh, I think you are right, I used the same style with all the characters. This will have to be worked on. But you will see no character description from ...

Harsh review, I like this! Though, let me try to put some reasoning behind your critique: What I'm experimenting here is a series of flash-fiction stories that are also linked ...

Wow, thanks. English is my 2nd, please understand my foolishness! XD

*blushes* Brandon is my favorite fantasy writer, though I really didn't write this under his infulence actually. xD Well, how did Shin Ak die is one of those things not ...

Thanks for the review!

Hey, thanks for review! There is actually a prologue briefly about the Scarf Man too, you can read it :)

Hey Dreamy! Thanks for reading. I kinda wanted this to look the way you got it, even the info-dump part and refusing to give a single description on what is ...

Thanks for reading! The second line you pointed out, you are right, comment seems a bit misplaced, I didn't make clear what's he referring to. Nice catch! xD

Thanks for review! I will keep your advice in mind :)

Thank you, this is really helpful!

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Thank you, it means a lot to me! :)