Alchemist

But, I didn't say so in the text itself. :P And since it's a first person narration, he can be romantically in love but choose to neglect it.

Nope, platonic love can be simply admiring someone for what he is, thats what the narraror thinks he feels, though it doens't have to be what is real. But platonic ...

Ehh, you reviewed, you cant be my bad friend :D hm, i kinda did explained why his friends were so bad, in a single line though.. The rest just really ...

Hmmm, i kinda swtched tenses intentionally, though the rest is just english being my 2nd language.. But tenses mixture, at least played out the way i wanted. Tnx for a ...

Tnx for sticking with this Deanie! You have no idea how helpful your reviews are! :) Somethings I couldn't have changed, like adding a pov other than Alice and Hashi ...

Tnx so much for sticking with this... I know it's such a long read QQ This was a hard chapter and also an interesting one for me, and there were ...

Hey, tnx for revew! Somehow it didn't pop in my notifications though..

Tnx for reveiwing! :) I've been getting some praise for my fighting scenes, so that's good, theres something I'm good at. xD Now serious. Hmm, I can see that you ...

Hello, tnx for the review! I'm glad magic system seems fine so far. It is definitely something I've only scratched so far, but I think I've shown the basics here. ...

Tnx for the feedback :)

Hey! Thanks for reviewing! I'm quite deep into this thing, though I'm writing it in my 1st language so there really is no need to nitpick at all. :) I ...

Well yeah, it would, but I feel bad about saying it since I'm not really that active anymore...xD

hey deanie,thanks for your review. I'm not sure if you wish to continue reviewing this story since im barely using yws nowdays, too many things to do... though I am ...

hey Zont, thanks for your review! It's really encouraging! :D

Hi Noelle, thanks for review! Ehh, I know that this really short POV of random soldier is kinda random, but while I was writing this I realized, I have no ...