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Alceste

  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Yes, we are aware that your family is obnoxious.

    Hm. I don't really know what I think about this. Personally, I'm not that big of a fan of repetitive poems, and this poem is practically the paragon of repetitivity ...

    Apr 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Hanky-Panky (An acrostic)

    This is interesting! I don't think I have seen an acrostic here before. Normally, I tend to avoid acrostics because of their simplistic nature. But his wonderful poem shows how ...

    Apr 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: That Sleepless Night

    I really enjoyed this poem! It brought up many emotions. The last stanza (is that what you call it?) was probably my favorite. The lines 'Not now, not ever again ...

    Nov 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Broken Promise [1]

    I really like this! It is extremely mysterious and has a good mood. I love the way the stanzas are built and the flow is mostly steady throughout the poem. ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: This Lonely World of White

    This seems like a very thought out poem! The words you use create a beautiful picture in my head. I feel cold just reading it! I especially liked the line ...

    Jun 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: This Lonely World of White

    Jun 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Endless: Part I

    I really like this! In just a few sentences you set up a very good 'style' for the character, then kept it up for the rest of the part. Sadly, ...

    Jun 24, 2013


Lots of times you have to pretend to join a parade in which you're not really interested in order to get where you're going.
— Christopher Darlington Morley