Alainna

Es- I LOVE your crits!!! You just simplify every worry I ever have over the development of Lyla and it seems so easy to fix when you put it down ...

I liked Guitar Girl's storyline but I also agree that Molly got slightly immature towards the end. I liked it when the band first formed and the first half of ...

Who might the author be? Daphne Du Maurier. It's a classic so it's fairly easy to get a hold of. xxx

*Overloads from sarcasm and flops down foaming at the mouth.* SPEW......

Unlike the others, I really liked how short the "caress her" line was. I thought it showed symbolism, like you were tired of explaining this and just needed to stop ...

Mmm.....Maybe I should add this to my summer (even though it's nearly over!) reading list. I'll try and get a copy. :D Alainna xxxxx

Ah, I've seen neither the show nor film.... It probably makes a difference when you have seen the above as the twist isn't a surprise and you know what's about ...

I've been trying to find a copy of 'Speak' for ages but nowhere seems to have it. I shall ransack all my libraries....... Alainna xxxx

I've read HDM and I loved them to death. Then I reread them...and I loved them even more! Have you tried any other Pullman books? What about The Butterfly Tattoo ...

This was a very good and intriguing piece. To improve- More background info. What else is going on in Lynnie's head? (Nice character name by the way.) I enjoyed this ...

I've never read His Dark Materials but have been meaning to. Would anyone here recommend it to someone who doesn't like Lord of the Rings, likes Terry Pratchett and Harry ...

Oh, sorry for confusing everyone!! I hate the fact that the American version of books have to have different titles. What's wrong with 'Northern Lights'? They did that with 'Junk' ...

Zomg. There was another book? After the third and there's a further one after that due out soon?! I hadn't known... I must say I'm amazed. I usually know everything ...

Thanks everyone! I'm glad this part was an improvement on part 8! Kite-Pyjamas and recognised are the English ways of spelling them. :wink: Also, I'm going to change the rest ...

This was a fantastic chapter Twit and I could find no mistakes whatsoever. It was really absorbing and I can't wait for more! Alainna xxx