AkiKerosin

Whoa. This gave me chills reading it! I really like your word choice--the way you arrange them gives the poem VERY effective imagery. When I think of this person, I ...

This is . . . well, morbid! Ha. But it holds a lot of power. It definitely deals with an overlooked everyday scenario; actually, it deals with many. Not only ...

Hey there! =D First of all, I like the idea of this poem. It almost holds a sort of . . . dreamlike quality to it. It has a sort ...

I believe the usual statistics for dreams is something around forgetting 95% of them. As mentioned above, most are average things that don't catch our attention; simple things, like tying ...

-recruited- I love your word choicing here. It seems sort of like the opening words of an important experiment or adventure. It has that certain almost hungering voice to it. ...