Afterthought

Thanks everyone, I appreciate it massively :D argh, I hadn't even intended the double meaning of ride! There's a verb choice that's really got to go! It's been a massive ...

:D That's just the right amount of perfects now!

I really like this, especially the closing stanza. The 'christened head' confused me - I don't understand why it is christened? But that may be just me!

Thanks for the time :D I appreciate it, I'll work on it again with those suggestions.

I really like this! Especially the closing two lines. I'm not sure about 'Before you ran free in the air' - wouldn't fly make more sense? Cool poem.