AfterTheStorm

"Done on purpose"? Ah. Then maybe you should clear up some of those run-on and poorly written sentences. :)

Definitely. :D

Aw, man! I organized the chart all neatly, and it ruined the formatting. D': Sorry about that!!!

The formatting was moved around a bit, so it wouldn't allow me to separate my stanzas. Hence the usage of the dash. xD

WHOA. I just realized I reviewed your poem at 11:11. O__o It's a magical review. xD

Yes, those dashes signify the beginning of a new stanza because my formatting is messed up. xD It will not allow me to add space between each stanza. -___- Thanks ...

Yeah, sadly I had a word limit for this piece. The ending is a bit rushed, I agree, but now I can edit it and extend the conclusion. :D

Thanks, Barefoot! Your input really helps. I'm terrible at writing action scenes, as you've probably already concluded. xD It's definitely not my strongsuit because I always want to embellish my ...

Thank you so much, dear! You made my week. :D

Adorable! :D

Thanks, Fortis! And yeah, I have no clue why the font looks like that... Know how to change it???

Exactly! Spot on, Vivian. :D The bridge does represent the trials we all face, and how we choose to cross it.

The "bridge" in this poem isn't a literal bridge. :D Haha So all of those metaphors thrown in there like the water and the wind actually represent the struggles we ...

Hey, Xreigon! :) I appreciate your input on my short story. And the verb "waltzed" does not apply to pebbles, but that's the beauty of personification! :D Haha Thanks a ...

Haha :D Thank you so much, Ginger!!! Your comment means a bunch to me! ---Storm