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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Shattered Glass

    Ohh my God, it is so beautifully written!!! Congratulation for your work here, Justagirl! I just love it. Sorry if I don't have something useful to say...

    Jun 29, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Frisson

    I feel like angels guided me to this poem. That's exactly how I feel today! I love love love loooove it, my friend Congratulations!!

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chapter One: Rewrite

    Soul! I don't think I can say much, except for... well, this is amazing, darling! I loved the descriptions, they are absolutely breathtaking. You did an amazing job here!!

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chapter One: Rewrite

    *-* I love it, Soul!! Seriously, it is amazing!! I love love love love love it!

    Nov 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Stand Up

    This is REALLY good! Congratulations! I don't have anything helpful to say because I don't think you need any help here. Loved your poem! Write again soon!

    Sep 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Snow White Spoof

    OOHH! You deserve all the likes! It is so nice and funny! Congratulations! Sorry if I can't help, but I don't think there are much things to be changed.

    Sep 26, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Why death if we all fight for life?

    Guys, I know this subject is hard to discuss. Like I said, this story really happened and I just wanted to share it with you. I know there are a ...

    Sep 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: What America means to me

    WOW! I'm not american but after that I really wanted to be. At some times it sounds like you are forcing the words to rhyme, but the result is so ...

    Sep 14, 2011
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Independence

    Absolutely great! At the beginning I was wondering who was the character, but I think you did great in not describing him because it is not the point here. Instead, ...

    Sep 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Do not click this.

    That's so PERFECT!! It's short, funny, simple and absolutely true! And the tittle...Oh, the tittle...It's so good. I mean, if you want someone to do something, tell him/her not to ...

    Sep 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Reason to Run

    THAT'S AWESOME! It's simple and, despite that, incredibly strong and real. Who didn't feel that at least once? I really didn't find anything wrong with your poem. Congratulations! Keep writing.

    Sep 12, 2011
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: You aren't supposed to remember -A 9/11 memoir

    This is amazing! Absolutely great! It describes so well the feelings that made me feel trapped in there too.You made a really good job in here! Congratulations

    Sep 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Chasing nightmares

    I really like it! It made me feel like I'm a classroom, and the repetition of the term "stuck in..." gives me idea of a massive thing, also the feeling ...

    Sep 5, 2011


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