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It was just strange with... I can't even remember the guy's name right now. But in the beginning the first time I read it I pictured him as this middle-aged, ...

Wow! This is really, really good! "Tsuki no Usagi"... love it:) For your first attempt at poetry, this is amazing! *adna*

Hold on, why is this in the nonfiction section?

hehe, good job:) for both the poem and the napkin:)

Awesome. Totally and utterly awesome. I think that's all there is to say.

I just edited this a lot. Better think you?

The pushed together words were intentional... I have to admit, I didn't really know where I was going with this myself. I suppose I'd better work on that...

Silly, but well-done. Short poems aren't exactly my cup of tea, but for what these were, they were good.

Robin McKinley is one of my favorite authors in the world. I loved this book.

You are brilliant! And this was your first poem? I wish my first poem was half as good as this! I love this kind of poetry. *applause* Keep writing poetry! ...

hahaha:) "Plu!" I might just have to adopt your way of finding poems, yo:) bags of food... interesting *giggle* pretty sweet, yoyo *goldstar*

It's okay Ginger, I don't understand it either. At all. It has good rythm and flow... it just doesn't make any sense to me. Sorry I don't have time for ...

Kitty, I changed the point of view this time, because this is a retelling of the story, and I realized that even though I hadn't meant anything by putting it ...

I'm not sure I exactly understood your review either. Did you or did you not understand what the poem was about? I couldn't tell from what you said. And if ...

I made some more changes. I'm not sure if they were exactly what you were looking, but I hope I've improved things some. By 'mad', I mean crazy mad. Insane, ...