Adnamarine

Hi! I'm going to start with a couple dull little grammar things, if you don't mind, and get those out of the way. =D "My feet rise into the air ...

Hi! =) Any kind of poetry can go in "other poetry"; I always put it there if I'm not sure where it should go, so you're fine. :D I like ...

Hi! I'm going to be a little backwards and start with the conclusion of this poem. To be honest, that very last line was quite a let-down. Which, in some ...

Odd is one word I wouldn't use for this piece Expo, m'dear. I think it's very sweet and creative and familiar. I love how you mix the little things, the ...

Adam! I thought you said you didn't write poetry?! This is... wow. From a couple of the lines and the fact that you said you're not into poetry, and that ...

Hi Shina! I have to admit, the length and style of the piece make it more difficult for me to review--I guess I'm just slightly out of my reviewing comfort ...

Interesting theme. Something like this deserves an intense, dramatic, very focused style. There are definitely places you have that... and places you don't. It's important to use specific language, to

Hello dear :) This is a nice little poem. =D What I want to know from you though is, do this mean something to you? Is this a subject you ...

Hi Expo =) This is lovely. Something about it, the tone, the wording, reminds me of butterflies, and pretty, delicate, golden fragile things; it just melts in your mouth and ...

Hiii! So here we go. My first review for you. One grammar nitpick I'll point out, in the second line: The wind cries it’s plea. It really should be "its". ...

Hello there =) This is an interesting little piece, and actually, I think it really has potential. The ending, especially, caught my attention. The ending is what makes this stand ...

You know, I think I like this? It's simple, it's short and sweet. Now, if you left it the same as it is now and tried to make it longer, ...

Martian! Darling! I see you got quite a number of review, and I'm sure some excellent ones (I notice our dear Demi reviewed you). Rather than go through all their ...

Hi! First, welcome to YWS! =) Stale, black reading glasses Lay vague upon the table

Another absolutely stellar piece. I don't feel so guilty about this review, since I can actually make some suggestions. =) As they lay her down "Lay" should be "laid". In ...