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Re: blank canvas
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have here. Oh and Happy Review Day! I hope your's has been nice because mind has been! I feel like ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: I'll Take My Vitamin D in a Supplement, Thanks
Hello! KatyaElefant here for a review! Let me see what we have here. Oh and Happy Review Day! The way you make stanzas is actually quite simple and you don't ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Writing.
Hello! Happy Review Day! KatyaElefant here to make you a review! Let's see what you have done here. One thing that I feel that is out of place the this ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: True Love
Hello! KatyaElefant here to review! Oh and Happy Review Day! I love this poem! It is so cute! I have this kind of relationship with my food too. (shhh. Don't ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Girlfriend
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Happy Review Day! I can't say anything against this because I liked it a lot. Your grammar is pretty good and I have to ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Pact, Chapter Two, Part One
Hello! KatyaElefant here! Happy Review Day! Let us see what you have done here(I love this series so much right now!!!! I read the prologue and all of this makes ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Space
Hello! KatyaElefant here for a review! Let us see what we have here! Oh and Happy Review Day! NITPICKS: And know that we're all empty spaces And that I don't ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Blood and Silver Ch. Nine
Hello! KatyaElefant here to review! Happy Review Day! Let me see what you have written here... Just one small thing that I would like to point out but it is ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Blind - Chapter 19
Hello! KatyaElefant here to review! Happy Review Day! Oh gosh! 0_0 Chapter 19, well...I'll see what I can do... NITPICK 1 and 2: I liked her, and I was glad ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: -
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Happy Review Day! I love the title (Knife) by the way. :P NITPICK: “You don’t have a weapon.” I hold my breath, but Stephen ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Rifted - Chapter III - First And Last
Hello! KatyaElefant here to review! Oh and Happy Review Day! I just jumped in at Part III, that is not good... XD NITPICK: Unfortunately, I do note believe that he ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Soul's Decay : Chapter Thirteen
Hello! KatyaElefant here! Happy Review Day! Oh my gosh! This chapter is sooo long! Okay let's get reviewing. Shall we? NITPICK 1: “Why do youcare?” Abel muttered at Dominic sullenly. ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution Season 2: Episode 15, Family Over Love
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Happy Review Day! OH MY GOSH! POKEMON! NITPICK 1: "It's amazing how much of a natural she is." Jake gawed Is gawed, an actual ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Golden Days- Chapter 2: Just another day at the races
Hello! KatayElefant here! Happy Review Day! Let us see what we have here. I have no criticism for this. I just can't think of thing that is wrong with it. ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Necromancer's Reckoning: Chapter 12
Hello! KatyaElefant here! Happy Review Day! Just jumping in to a random chapter of a story that I have never read. XD Let's see how this will go... NITIPICK 1: ...
Jun 29, 2014