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yes, good points there. Thanks for reading this massive chapter. Didn't realize it was so long till I started scrolling it myself. The original Book is Black Eyes Book 1: ...

:) I will read more of your work.

Ok, so maybe I should have posted this chapter in 2 parts...

Wondrous! Thanks for reading and reviewing yet another time. Hope you will also read the chapters I am yet to post.

Ah, brilliant.

Thanks for reviewing another of my chapters. Well my book 1 is 222,000 words in 40 chapters. Book 2 here should be similar :)

Ah, I see. Well remember that you can't keep the meaning of the poem in your head. Make it a bit more... readable. Or maybe I'm just a little dense ...

ha. thank you :D I would be honored if you would continue to review my works.

Thanks much for the review! And yes, this is the sequel to a novel I already got published.

Thanks for the review. I will look into your points.

thanks much! I will post again soon.

Thanks for the review! Hope you keep reading and reviewing the story. Blade is certainly one of my favorite characters. Think he was even cooler in book 1 when he ...

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Okay so this is rewritten, and thank goodness it's better. It's still not yet at the level I'd like to see it, but some fundamental problems were taken care of. ...

Thanks for your splendid review! As for the points about the dialogue with 'ounce of time' and so on, I know it is not literally possible to measure time in ...

Thanks for the review!